This was really beautiful to read.

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You missed when time and life shook hands and said goodbye, when the earth folded in on itself.

thank you very much! i'm glad you liked it! *smiles*

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When life hands you lemons....Throw them at people..

I'm going to go out on a limb and say virginity. Beautiful poem none the less.

thank you very much! hm..thats not what I had in mind when I wrote it, but you know it fits the poem doesn't it? Thank you for the feedback!! I like hearing what others think! So thank you!

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When life hands you lemons....Throw them at people..

ooOOo the jar is of childhood memories?

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I'm not against what's wrong,
I'm not for what's right
I'm just making my way and I'm gone

i realy like this...such a beautiful idea that a child would keep there memories/lost dreams in a jar...love the line "the unthought dreams of my silhouette" reminded me of peter pan where hes chasing his runnaway shadow.

i was gunna ask if i could try doing a picture for this even before i read your comment as i i like the idea of a child sitting on a tall hill at night staring at a broken jar (or sitting opening it) watching all the memories gust up into stars....could have images representing lost dreams and innocence in the light trails before they become stars....or that might be too much.

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"The past is far gone replaced by this moment, we're shadows of ourselves confined to shelves with nothing left to say, Content to fade away and for all we know, all this is just a dream, things are not exactly as they seem" sinch - sails

I couldn't help but notice a similarity in our poetry.
short but strong...and sweet of course.
well done

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i own an army of pink bananas

*smiles* your pretty good! I'd say it almost seems like you've read it before! But yeah! Memories..childhood in itself...all that! Thanks for the comment!

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When life hands you lemons....Throw them at people..

Thank you so much!

And you have no idea how much I would love that! You don't even have to ask! I would love to see your picture for this! I like your ideas for it already! I think you could really turn it into a great piece! Would you really do that? Did I say yet how much I would love that?

And yeah! That's exactly what I thought of too! Peter Pan's shadow! I was thinking all those disney movies, and just the childhood simpleness..we tend to forget it as we get older.

thank you so much for the comment!! Thank you! Thank you!

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When life hands you lemons....Throw them at people..